Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Some L:ike It Hot

Author’s Note: This book is a story about 4 girls on their prom night and here are a few opinions that I have on it.

I think Some Like It Hot by Zoey Dean is a very descriptive book. It tells you all the things that actually happen. She tells you what it looks like and what happens and well she writes the book she adds lots of detail.

The first detail is that she writes about all the dresses that they have to choose from.
She says that  “ We have the choice between this black dress, the red one or the green one.”
That is descriptive because she explained all the dresses that the girls could choose from.

Another detail is that she described where the prom is going to be in a lot of detail. She wrote
“ We’re going to met at the fake Colosseum. Then for the after party we’re going to go to Hermosa Beach.”
That is descriptive because it tells us what the prom is going to be like.

The last detail is that they describe what the prom looks like.
She says “ There’s chariots outside, there’s a pool next to the bathrooms and the refreshments are next to the door.”
That is a really good description because it gets a picture in your mind of what the prom actually looks like.

I think Zoey Dean is a really talented writer. That adds a lot of detail in her writing and is a really descriptive writer.

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Invisible

Author's Note: This is a story that is connected to lyrics to a Big Time Rush song.

Do you ever wonder, when you listen to the thunder
And your world just feels so small
Put yourself on the line and time after time
Keep feeling inside that they don’t know you’re alive
Are you out of your mind or just invisible

But I won’t let you fall
I’ll see you, through them all
And I just want to let you know

Oh, when the lights go down in the city
You’ll be there shining bright
You’re a star and the sky’s the limit
And I’ll be by your side
Oh, you know, your not invisible to me
Oh, you know, you’re not gonna be invisible

Do you ever think of, what you’re  standing at the brink of
Feel like giving up, but you just can’t walk away
And night after night, always trying to decide
Are you going to  speak out or get lost in the crowd
Do you take a chance of being invisible

But I won’t let you fall
I’ll see you, through them all
And I just wanna let you know

Oh, when the lights go down in the city
You’ll be right there shining bright
You’re a star and the sky’s the limit
And I’ll be right by your side
Oh, you know, you’re not invisible to me
Oh, you know, you’re not going to be invisible

Gotta look far, I’ll be where you are
I wish you could see what I see
So don’t ask why,  just look inside
Baby it’s all you need
And I don’t understand why you won’t ( you won’t)
Take my hand and go
Cause you’re so beautiful
And everytime that

Oh, when the lights go down in the city
You’ll be right there shining bright
You’re a star and the sky’s the limit
And I’ll be right by your side
Oh, you know, you’re not invisible to me
Oh, you know, you’re not going to be invisible

Oh, when the lights go down in the city
You’ll be right there shining bright
You’re a star and the sky’s the limit
And I’ll be right by your side
Oh, you know, you’re not invisible to me
Oh, you know, you’re not going to be invisible
Is It Over?

I don’t know what to do anymore. I have no friends. I have no dreams I just don’t know what to do. I feel like a nobody. It seems like no one cares and no one ever will. I just want to be me the one that was happy and had dreams. But no I can’t be happy that isn’t possible. I’ll never be me again everyone hates me they always will. It seems as if my life is over I keep asking myself “is it over yet?”

It all started on Monday when I got to school. All my friends just told me they wanted to be friends with me anymore. Then when I got to drama my teacher wanted to talk to me she told me that I’m getting a D in drama that gives my dream of becoming a lawyer gone I’ll never get into a good enough law school. My dreams gone my friends gone. I feel like I have nothing. So now I’m at home crying up in my bedroom having no idea what to do next.

The next day I go to school. I try so hard to be as nice as I can even though it’s really hard. But then my friends come up to me they ask me why I’m so sad. I ask them why their still talking to me. They ask me why they wouldn’t be talking to me then I tell them that yesterday they told me that they weren’t talking to me. They said that they never said that. Then I went to drama.

Ok now I know something is wrong. Just then I woke up everything was a dream so that means that I still have dreams and friends I’m fine. Yes my life is awesome again. I can go back to normal. YES!!!

The Outsider

Author's Note: This short story is about a girl that feels like she doesn't belong. She feels like she shouldn't be here.

I was just walking down the hallway on a normal day of school. Everyone was staring at me I didn’t know why though. I didn’t do anything wrong I was just walking down the hallway. But then everyone started yelling at me why did you do that how could you even say that. Everyone was yelling at me I didn’t know what to do. I was stuck with no way out.

Later that night I texted my best friend. I told how at school everyone hates me for no reason I also told her how I felt like nothing for the first time. I felt left out I felt like an outsider like I didn’t belong.

The next day at school everyone was talking about what I did. But this time someone stood out above all the noise. I heard them say. “She didn’t even do anything. So would you just be quiet.” I knew she was talking about me. She stood up for me finally someone that knows that I didn’t do anything.

After that everyone started talking about other things. All because of the one girl that stood up for me. Then I went up to her and thanked her then after that we became friends and I wasn’t an outsider anymore I was me again.

Friday, January 13, 2012

Life Lessons

Author's Note: There are some life lessons in this song. I hope you already have heard of these life lessons. 

 
Cover Girl
By: Big Time Rush

I don’t know why you always get so insecure
I wish you could see what I see when you’re looking in the mirror
And why won’t you believe me when I say
That to me you get more beautiful, everyday

When you’re looking at the magazines
And Thinking that you’ll never measure up
You’re wrong

Cause you’re my cover, cover girl
I think you’re a superstar, yeah you are
Why don’t you know
Yeah, you’re so pretty that it hurts
It’s what’s underneath you’re skin
The beauty that shines within
You’re the only one that wrongs my world
My cover girl
Oh,my cover girl

You walk in rain boots on a perfect summer day
Somehow you always see the dark side, when everything’s okay
And you wear baggy clothes that camouflage you’re shape
Whoa, but you know I love you, just the way you’re made

When you’re looking at the magazines
And thinking that you’re just not good enough
You’re so wrong baby

Cause you’re my cover, cover girl
I think you’re a superstar, yeah you are
Why don’t you know
Yeah. you’re so pretty that it hurts
It’s what’s underneath you’re skin
The beauty that shines within
You’re the only one that rocks my world
My cover girl

Got a heart of gold, a perfect orginal
Wish you would stop being so hard on yourself for a while
And when I see that face
I’d try a thousand ways
I would do anything to make you smile

Cause you’re my cover,cover girl
I think you’re a superstar, yeah you are
Why don’t you know
Yeah, you’re so pretty that it hurts
It’s what’s underneath you’re skin
The beauty that shines within
You’re the only one that rocks my world
My cover girl
Oh woah oh oh oh, my cover girl
Oh woah oh oh oh, my cover girl

Woah oh, my cover girl
Woah oh, my cover girl




This song has four huge life lessons in it. One is to always be yourself, the second one is that beauty comes within, the third one is to always believe in yourself and the fourth one is that everyone is different.

Always be yourself means that whatever you do you always have to be you. You may change sometimes but you have to remember who you are you always have to be yourself. That means that you shouldn’t have anybody change you, you should always just be yourself.

Beauty comes within means that you shouldn’t care about what they look like it only matters what their personality is. It doesn’t matter what the person looks like it just matters what their personality is. So just remember it doesn’t matter what a person looks like it just matters what their personality is like.

Always believe in yourself means that you should always believe you can do something. All you have to do is set your mind to something and you can succeed. If you just believe in yourself you can succeed at anything.

Everyone is different means that everyone is different from the next person. We’re all different we all have different personalities no one is the same we’re all different in are own special way.

These are some very good life lessons to know. I hope you life by them and know that they are all good to know.

Thursday, January 5, 2012

iPhone

Author's Note: Here's a object paragraph a iPhone.

Thank you thank you, thank you so much I think as my owner Julianna rips me out of my box and picks me up.After years of being in the ATT store being pulled, touched and pushed. I’m finally saved. Thank you soo much. I’m saved, saved from my misery.

Wait no no what are you doing no I  don’t belong here where is this. It’s dark it’s dangerous where am I. Oh there it’s Julianna. “ Yeah I finally found my phone” She texts to her friend Sara. “I left it at the park.I’m so glad I found it.”

Yes I can finally go back to my normal life as a phone thank you sooo much.