Author’s Note: I decided to write about what I would do if I was in the same situation that two of the characters were in. They were lost in the desert with no food, water, phone or watch. They had no way out.
In the book Tall Cool One by Zoey Dean Anna and Sam were just in the middle of the desert looking at the clouds. They decided to get rid of there watch and phones. They didn’t have any food or water. Then they decided to go for a walk. They were walking away from the town that they were at.Then it started to rain they ran as fast as they could in the wrong direction. of course it ends in a good way. But not all things have to have a happy ending.
Hello who does that if I was them I would pay attention to what I was doing and look behind me to try and remember where the town was. I also wouldn’t get rid of my watch or cellphone. That wasn’t that smart of an idea because in a desert it is really easy to get lost and they should’ve kept their phones just in case they got lost or they could’ve at least paid attention to what their doing. Next time they better pay attention to their surroundings and watch what their doing.
After that Anna and Sam decided to go into a house that they found in the middle of the desert. They found clothes and changed into them. How dumb can they be you can’t just barge into someone’s house and steal their clothes. You could go to jail for that. Like really can you actually think about what your doing? But it gets worse they decided to stay their for the night. I know your tried and you rain in the rain but you don’t spend a night at someone’s house that you didn’t ask permission for even know them.
The next day the security on the house has finally been reached and they woke up and the bodyguards were in the house. They could hear them downstairs. So they decided to stay right where they were. If you hear someone downstairs that is going to take you to jail you should at least try and hid. They tried to explain that Sam’s dad is Jackson Sharpe the movie star but that didn’t help. The security guys took them out to the car then they say a helicopter with a ladder coming down from it. It was Sam’s dad.
Seriously that wouldn’t happen in real life. I think Zoey Dean really needs to rewrite the book. She really needs to think about what would actually happen. Not all stories have to end with a person saving another person. Not all stories have a happy ending.
In the book Tall Cool One by Zoey Dean Anna and Sam were just in the middle of the desert looking at the clouds. They decided to get rid of there watch and phones. They didn’t have any food or water. Then they decided to go for a walk. They were walking away from the town that they were at.Then it started to rain they ran as fast as they could in the wrong direction. of course it ends in a good way. But not all things have to have a happy ending.
Hello who does that if I was them I would pay attention to what I was doing and look behind me to try and remember where the town was. I also wouldn’t get rid of my watch or cellphone. That wasn’t that smart of an idea because in a desert it is really easy to get lost and they should’ve kept their phones just in case they got lost or they could’ve at least paid attention to what their doing. Next time they better pay attention to their surroundings and watch what their doing.
After that Anna and Sam decided to go into a house that they found in the middle of the desert. They found clothes and changed into them. How dumb can they be you can’t just barge into someone’s house and steal their clothes. You could go to jail for that. Like really can you actually think about what your doing? But it gets worse they decided to stay their for the night. I know your tried and you rain in the rain but you don’t spend a night at someone’s house that you didn’t ask permission for even know them.
The next day the security on the house has finally been reached and they woke up and the bodyguards were in the house. They could hear them downstairs. So they decided to stay right where they were. If you hear someone downstairs that is going to take you to jail you should at least try and hid. They tried to explain that Sam’s dad is Jackson Sharpe the movie star but that didn’t help. The security guys took them out to the car then they say a helicopter with a ladder coming down from it. It was Sam’s dad.
Seriously that wouldn’t happen in real life. I think Zoey Dean really needs to rewrite the book. She really needs to think about what would actually happen. Not all stories have to end with a person saving another person. Not all stories have a happy ending.
